So much has been said
Pain overflowed from where I stand
Dreams were left still shattered
Perhaps there is no way to undo everything
We can’t replace sad memories with good ones
And you can’t give hope to the hopeless
If we look into each other’s eyes
You will not see a trace of the past
It was washed away by my tears
Why constantly say promises
When everybody stopped believing
Tell me what is the use
If all colors of the rainbow are the same?
You cannot stop the rain from falling
And the only way out is the door
So, stop catching me whenever I fall
Because I need to be here
It is a lonely place out here
But its lonelier to be with you
Tuesday, February 21, 2006
Come Undone
Posted by C H E R at 2:05 AM
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Wow! what a great one this. Are you really hurt? If not, you're one heck of a writer/poetess. Keep up the good work. I'm sure someday, you'll get a great name [who knows, your blog could come under Bloggers of Note too!!]
HI Cherry: I think that poem is pretty good, but not sure what is accomplished by leaving the punctuation out. Might try to add it and then ask what is created by leaving it out. My favorite line was the ending, sort of tied the whole thing together. ~Pete
mukhang u still sleep way pass hour in the mownin.....adn seems u r too bz...kahit online ka...pm kita wont answer me...ok lng..ewei juz wana drop by tp say hi...tc god bless
mark_22314 ~~ pogi ako "
"woohohoho,,, you miss him ryt? eehehhe..." nangako sya na darating pero hindi natupad...wahahaha..." come to mama....wahahaha""" ehehehe peace po ...
nice poem..
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